Haiku ( First attempt)

Classic haiku ( syllables 5/7/5)

Note : All three haiku are not connected, read them as individual pieces.

my love  for you which
i consider tacenda
passes in silence
a breeze turning wild
a child of chaos and calm
woman in making.

wings I see today,
of birds and aeroplanes
drawing shapes in sky.

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11 Comments Add yours

  1. Nicely done! I love haiku. Have you tried Haibun? It’s challenging!

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    1. Well not yet but now that you have mentioned will for sure try it out. Thanks for reading

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  2. You did really awesome!

    I wrote my first about a year ago. Very challenging for me!

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    1. Thank you so much. Yeah it’s really a challenging form of poetry. ❤️

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      1. Like that block poetry (i dont know what it’s called) words in blocks and you form poems from them.

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        1. Yeah! I know i have tried that too, but haiku is much tough than that.

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  3. Very sweet poem. All the best.

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  4. akshita1776 says:

    Great one for a first attempt!

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